The presentations of the first exercise, took place in EMB 3121 from 3pm-6pm. The main comment made about our piece was that it appeared rushed. I was expecting this as it evidently was. Another improvement that was mentioned was that more footage of people walking past the busker should have been used, possibly as a long shot. I think that Myself and Leon were already aware that we needed this, however, as explained earlier the footage gained was not usable. Instead, I admit that a couple of shots were repeated, and this is what I think made the film appear rushed.

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